How to Write & Use Email Effectively

January 21st, 2012

I’ve been using email since its earliest days and it has become an essential tool in my day to day business and personal life. It’s not so long ago that written correspondence was by snail mail and fax but I cannot imagine today’s business with those limitations.

Unfortunately the speed with which email operates can create problems and poorly written or poorly executed email reflects badly on the individual and/or organization sending the correspondence.

Spam is a well known and extensively written about issue but not one I intend to discuss here. Rather I’d prefer to focus on how to write and use email effectively.

I trust the following will be helpful.

Recipient Fields

It seems obvious that when sending an email to someone they are placed in the ‘to’ field but it is all too tempting to put multiple names in the ‘to’ field and start with ‘Dear All’ so that nobody actually knows whether they should respond or not.

There is a simple rule to cover who should be in the ‘to’ field. Addressees in the ‘to’ field are expected to take action and the content of the email should clearly state what action each is being asked to take.

If you wish to include others in the email for information only and you are not asking them to take any action then place them in the ‘cc’ field.

If you receive an email and you are in the ‘cc’ field you are not expected to take action but if you find that you have something to contribute then reply to the sender.

There are occasions where you may wish to include someone on ‘cc’ but it is undesirable for the other recipients to receive the persons email details. In this case include them in the ‘bcc’ field.

Useful Subject Fields

A good subject line provides a useful summary of the email’s contents giving the reader a clear indication of what the email is about so that the recipient can decide on its priority and avoid ignoring or deleting important emails.
Best practice is one subject per email but where an email must cover multiple subjects reflect that in the ‘subject field’. If the subject of an email changes during the conversation then make sure the ‘subject field’ is changed to reflect the new subject.

Well Presented Content Fields

When writers took time to draft letters and send them by snail mail or fax care was taken to make sure that the document was well presented, grammatically correct with accurate spelling. It was recognized that the document which would arrive on someone’s desk or fax machine reflected the business it was sent from.

Unfortunately the speed with which email is now written and transmitted has resulted in this care and attention being lost in many cases. Email is much less formal than the traditional business letter and starting with ‘Hello’ or ‘Hi’ is fine, but a business email still reflects the business it represents. Poor formatting, multiple font types and sizes, multiple text colors, poor grammar, inaccurate spelling, abbreviations and the liberal use of smiley icons are just a selection of the problems to be avoided. An ugly and poorly presented email is far more likely to be deleted than one well presented no matter what the content is.

When is Urgent Really Urgent?

I have to admit to being a frequent sender of ‘urgent’ emails, mostly they are to start with but at some point the ‘urgent’ tag could be removed. It also has to be understood that what may be urgent to the sender may not be as urgent to the recipient.

Some recommend never using the ‘urgent’ option and allowing the recipient to prioritize. I prefer to show that there is urgency but recommend only using the ‘urgent’ option when it is needed. Use it when it is not needed and it will be ignored when the urgency is important.

The Tone of the Email

Even when responding to aggressive or disrespectful emails it is important to maintain composure and always be polite. A strange aspect of email and the internet in general is that there are people who will behave in ways online that they would never dream of doing face to face. It is so easy to send an aggressive email, just type and send, while most would think twice about doing the same face to face or even over the telephone.

If your email is set to send immediately and you have the habit of shooting from the hip then think about saving email to draft first, wait , have a coffee or tea and then go back and read it again. You’d be surprised how an email can sound on second reading.

Avoid the use of multiple question marks or exclamation marks as these are recognized as aggressive statements. Never insert a line of capital letters into your text as this is recognized as a shouted statement and under no circumstances resort to comic book jumble of symbols commonly understood to represent swearing.

When drafting a difficult reply I sometimes remove the names of those in the ‘to’ and ‘cc’ fields and save them at the top of the content field. This way I don’t accidentally send an email and keep a list of the names on the original mail. Just remember to remove the names when placing them back into the ‘to’ and ‘cc’ fields.

Then save, relax, read, think, edit and send.

Above all be polite.

Email or Novel

Avoid lengthy emails. Recipients are busy, receiving lots of email a day, and unfortunately you can easily lose them if they have to scroll down to read your long email. Keep your emails short but if you have to write a long email provide a brief summary in the first paragraph which clearly states that it is a summary and the detail is below. The reader can then read the summary and flag the email should he need to allocate time for a complete reading at a later time.

Read Carefully, Answer Promptly and Accurately

When you receive an email read it carefully, make sure that you understand the question and answer accurately. Answer promptly but not too quickly. Taking time to make sure you are answering fully and correctly will save time in the long run. Answering incorrectly will result in delays, frustration and much more email than needed.

Reply to All

The easiest way to reply to an email is to ‘reply to all’ but the smart way is to think about who you need to reply to. The generally accepted rule is that you reply to sender but if you really need to include others then use the same ‘to’ and ‘cc’ rule as described earlier. The habit of ‘reply to all’ can result in massive volumes of email most of which is not even read by the majority on ‘cc’.

Maintain the Content Thread

While email strings can become long I prefer not to delete the email content I am replying to as this maintains continuity but if you do have to delete the former content then make sure that your reply references the original email and question, and that you maintain the same subject line so that the recipient understands the subject and answer.

Attachments

Be selective about the attachments you add to an email and make sure that they are essential to the conversation. If there are multiple people on the ‘to’ and ‘cc’ list then perhaps the attachments are not needed by all. If this is the case then tell the recipients that attachments will be sent separately to those who need them. Use one of the large file services available online now instead of email or provide a link for those who wish or need to download from.
Make sure attachments are not too large that they create email download or inbox problems for the recipients.

Ending Your Email

Again be polite when ending your email and as you would with a letter finish it with your name and add your contact details. Most email systems allow an automatic signature but I like the personal touch and the ending of an email varies depending on who the conversation is with.

Selecting & Managing A China LED Screen Manufacturer

May 28th, 2011

China, and China manufacturing, have seen massive changes in the 25 years since I arrived in Hong Kong and neighboring Shenzhen has seen a complete transformation. A fishing village some 30 years ago it is now a city dwarfing Hong Kong with every manner of industry and one of the largest concentrations of LED display screen manufacturers anywhere in the world.

If you are in the LED screen industry, have visited any of the shows in recent years, or have ever used Alibaba the chances are you will be a frequent recipient of ‘marketing’ emails from the hoards of China LED screen manufacturers competing in what is an increasingly cut throat business.

If you have ever posted an LED screen requirement on Alibaba the chances are you will have received hundreds of offers, 90% of them nothing to do with your posting, and will be still receiving the same over and over. By the time you had filtered out the 10% of useful offers you may have been stunned by some of the prices and may even have asked yourself who these people are and how these prices are possible.

The fact is that you can pay just about anything for a screen out of China. Literally from the sublime to the rediculous, but you do get what you pay for in most cases. So how do you judge what is a fair price and which manufacturer can be relied on to consistantly produce quality product?

Quite simply you cannot rely solely on claims made by email or through B-to-B marketing sites because specifications, even when offered, rarely detail the cost saving tricks that manufacturers have learnt from competing in the aggressively priced mainland China market.

Poor quality steel or aluminum workmanship, poor weatherproofing, rusting metal and screws, lack of conformal coating, non UL or CE PSU’s and cabling, cheap replacement components, low performance drivers, steel LED lead-frames and ‘local’ LEDs are a small selection of the issues to check and constantly look out for.

Sites such as Alibaba certainly play a major role in the marketing strategy of the majority of China manufacturers and can be a useful starting point but with no clear bench mark against which to judge advertisers you could easily ignore a quality manufacturer and short list poorer options based on price or promises alone. A few days in China can be a costly experience if you have selected the wrong list of manufacturers but many visitors leave disappointed and have to repeat the exercise because getting into detailed discussions on specifications and negotiating quotations with several prospective manufacturers via email or Skype can be a lengthy, time consuming and frustrating exercise.

Personal references certainly help when available but many buyers are reluctant to share a good source, so at the end of the day you either have to work through this exercise and visit China to see manufacturers for yourself or use the services of someone like Bateman Consulting to handle the negotiations, arrange factory inspections, and produce a report on which you can then base your planned visit or purchasing decision.

The actual quotation process has to be managed very carefully. Not too long ago I experienced a case of a Shenzhen based manufacturer who had aggressively courted a UK distributor with very attractive prices, promises of great terms & conditions, short delivery and amazing quality, but then when product was actually defined the price was 20% higher and in my opinion the factory and its products on show were simply not acceptable. This is by no means an isolated case.

The majority of manufacturers are either focused on the local market or have only recently decided to increase focus on an export market, and with such manufacturers you are dealing with engineers and QA staff who have a local mindset. It takes time to explain that connectors, wiring and power supplies acceptable in China may not be acceptable to an overseas client.

Many of the larger manufacturers are now employing the services of experienced consultants and overseas staff to help them transition from a local to an export mindset, and a manufacturer with a reasonable export track record, or one which has had the forsight to import needed expertise is going to be more understanding of your needs and more willing to make changes to suite your market. Even then however you need someone who will manage the manufacturing process making spot checks at key points during production, and conducting pre-shipment inspection to ensure that the product meets the specification. Again, Bateman Consulting fills this role.

When comparing manufacturers I find it useful to compare prices and specifications for similar pitch products as this serves as a broad strokes indication of what product standards are being manufactured to. However this is only useful combined with a factory and product inspection. On product, it is not simply enough to view an operating screen image but important to understanding the manufacturing processes and materials including cabinet quality, PSU’s, connectors, cables, screws, whether conformal coating is used, the type and quality of tile plastics, manufacturing processes, burn-in and QA procedures to name just a few.

In addition to product price indications, key considerations in selecting a manufacturer include the factory & its location, equipment available, organization, engineering and operational resources, sub contract resources, current product designs & quality, materials and components used by the factory and export experience.

Selection is all the more difficult when looking for screens for the events industry because there are relatively few China manufacturers with an understanding of the needs of the events industry. There are however some very good companies manufacturing truly ‘European design’ fast-rig products but these manufacturers are rare.

If you are presently in the market for LED screens, I would encourage you to contact us to discuss how Bateman Consulting can support you.